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Friday, 20 December 2019

swimming to safety

HI bloggers today in the summer learning journey I will be doing
activity 2 day 5 week 1: swimming to safety 
for this activity I will have to do read or listen to a podcast and then rewrite it
hope you like it

This story is to inspire little girls to dream bigger and fight harder
it is about 100 heroic woman around the world


Once once upon time in Damascus Syria there was a swimmer called yusra.
yusra has not always be a swimmer when she was little she was to scared to go in the pool when the other kids swam she would stand at the deep end of the pool steering into the water she called barely see the bottom and when she thought about plunging her head in first her heart bet a little faster the pool did not just scared her it existed her to little by so little by little she breathe the water she dipped her toes trying to stay afloat and plunged her head in the water.

if you want to read more here is a link down below

link here 
BOG YOU LATER!!!

1 comment:

  1. Hi Angus,

    Wonderful to read your story about Yusra! Imagine how scary it would have been for her getting into the water for the first time.

    I really like how you have talked about how Yusra's heart would have been racing! This really describes what is happening in her head.

    Don't forget to use pictures and colour in your posts! It really adds to your work and catch's the eyes of us readers. :)


    Well done on completing another activity. I'm excited to see more posts from you soon.

    Bye for now,

    Gabe

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