I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Angus it's Chrysler your friend here I like how you have some things that you want to be when you are older.Maybe next time you could add a full stop at the end of your sentance.Blog You Later!
Hi Angus It's your friend Kaunteya here. I like your blog post about your Ambition but maybe make your words bigger because I can't really see what you wrote.Other then that you did good. BLOG YA LATER!!
Kia ora Angus! Zoey here! I like how you have multiple choices of what you want to be when your older! Maybe next time you could put in some other goals and things that you want to improve at. Blog you later!
Kia Ora Angus, it's Kareem here. This was mind blowing because you put multiple thoughts about what you want to be when you grow up. I have lots of things about what I want to grow up too. Maybe you could say what you want to be the most out of the four jobs so that you can be specific.
im basty.wow! you want that to be teacher,builder,firefighter and butcher...when you say that you made me feel better because i want to be a builder like you...maybe next time text in here because you never text on your blogspot right.. bye bye.....
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ReplyDeleteHi Angus it's Chrysler your friend here I like how you have some things that you want to be when you are older.Maybe next time you could add a full stop at the end of your sentance.Blog You Later!
ReplyDeleteHi Angus Jesse here your friend. This is realy cool but I can't see the words you need to make them bigger. BLOG YOU LATER!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Angus Dani here add more detail because you cant see most of the words and you need to make more sense nice work see ya later.
ReplyDeleteHi Angus It's your friend Kaunteya here. I like your blog post about your Ambition but maybe make your words bigger because I can't really see what you wrote.Other then that you did good. BLOG YA LATER!!
ReplyDeleteHello Angus it's Kevin here and I like your ambition drawing I like what your goals are. Maybe you could explain more about it.
ReplyDeleteBlog Ya Later (:
Kia ora Angus! Zoey here!
ReplyDeleteI like how you have multiple choices of what you want to be when your older! Maybe next time you could put in some other goals and things that you want to improve at.
Blog you later!
Kia Ora Angus, it's Kareem here.
ReplyDeleteThis was mind blowing because you put multiple thoughts about what you want to be when you grow up. I have lots of things about what I want to grow up too. Maybe you could say what you want to be the most out of the four jobs so that you can be specific.
im basty.wow! you want that to be teacher,builder,firefighter and butcher...when you say that you made me feel better because i want to be a builder like you...maybe next time text in here because you never text on your blogspot right.. bye bye.....
ReplyDeletehi i am ethan i and you are telling every what you want to be i hope you get to do when you are old
ReplyDeleteKia ora Shikarn here just looking at your blog and came past this blog post. This an awesome way of showing what ambition means.
ReplyDeleteBlog you later.