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Tuesday 7 December 2021

The kid in the lodge

Hello reader today I wrote this becuase we had to in class here it is hope you like it.


A dark blue sky the trees are black as the night with little patchs of snow like little pills of suger. Not much of the sky all you can see is black trees standing still as if they were waiting for someone to come. The snow on the ground with stones laying there as if they were going to sleep,  little bushes coming up as if they woke up from a deep nap. As one little kid waits in his lodge for Christmas to come the next day.


The little kid is very short and he has white hair and pale skin. He is wearing a stirped red and green jersey and he has blue eyes with a couple of freakles onj his face and he has sock the match with his jersey. He is waiting at the window looking for someone to fly past. He has a dreamy look on his face as if he saw Santa right in front of him as there’s a fire right behind him keeping him warm. 



His lodge got got crashed by one of the black trees falling the boy was stuck waiting for help waiting an hour has went past as he waited for someone to help him there was no one around then we all hope was lost he saw something it was a rabbit and then the rabbit ran away in fear.


He slowly froze to death becuase no one came for him,  it was painfull and he did not know what to do he got cut up really bad and that help  with the death as he was alone with branch in his back all he could see was santa pulling the finger and said don’t believe everything people tell you and the kid died.


  











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