I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thanks for sharing the splat page that you and Jesse worked on. You included some great photos to make your poster visually pleasing.
I wonder if next time you could work on your introduction and adding a little bit more detail. It would be great to see you linking your learning with the idea of "why are we doing this" to explain the task in more detail!
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Hi Angus
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing the splat page that you and Jesse worked on. You included some great photos to make your poster visually pleasing.
I wonder if next time you could work on your introduction and adding a little bit more detail. It would be great to see you linking your learning with the idea of "why are we doing this" to explain the task in more detail!
- Miss Birtch