Hello, readers today we are learning how to write a narrative. A narrative is a story that you talk about the characters . The narrative that I am writing about is the art that I did the other day. here is my story.
There was a man name Bob. One day he was walking across the bridge, he was taking to him to him self when he heard a bird in the trees. He look up and saw the bird in the trees tripping for help. Bob looked down and saw the nest that fell out of the tree. when he tried to help the bird he could not reach. The tree were the nest was right at the top. At the end of the bridge there was a ladder stand that were selling ladders. He ran to the end of the bridge to buy the ladder, he asked if he could borrow one of his ladders to help the bird at the end of the bridge its nest fell out of the tree. The man said "yes I will help you young man" he pick up the ladder and ran to the nest and helped the bird get its nest back he walk away knowing that he helped a mother bird with her nest.
Hi angus I like How you added detail in the story and how you drawed the picture for the road.It looks really good.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Angus
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your writing and art work to your blog. I really love the art you've created. In your narrative I can clearly see the orientation and complication. For next time you could try to add more sequence of events prior to the resolution, though I like the way your story had a happy ending. Remember to add in descriptive words (adjectives) to make your writing really engage your reader.
Well done on this task! :)
Miss Birtch