I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Angus I can see that you have worked hard on the DLO and it's always enjoyable to watch work that is presented this way. But some of your work doesn't make sense. Your definition of Puruka as a healing plant does not make sense. Is this out of the book or did you 'google' this? I would have liked to have seen more simple terms about Mahinga Kai. Keep your sentences simple to show that you understand your reading. Mrs Hastie
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Hi Angus
ReplyDeleteI can see that you have worked hard on the DLO and it's always enjoyable to watch work that is presented this way. But some of your work doesn't make sense.
Your definition of Puruka as a healing plant does not make sense. Is this out of the book or did you 'google' this?
I would have liked to have seen more simple terms about Mahinga Kai.
Keep your sentences simple to show that you understand your reading.
Mrs Hastie