Hello readers today I will be telling you why everyone should not be able to vote in the federal election.
Why not all people in New Zealand should not be able to vote in New Zealand. Because what if someone that is from a different county comes to ours then votes and two year later they leave and then the would of voted to make what they think is good and then the people will get mad. If everyone in New Zealand voted it would not make New Zealanders happy because people from other country are allowed to vote what they want it to be. That is why I think that not all people should vote
Hi Angus
ReplyDeleteI think you have some sensible ideas here. I think you have tried to use a rhetorical question at the start, but it doesn't quite make sense. Starting your persuasive writing with a question is a great strategy, I would suggest having another look and seeing how you can make it work better for this topic.
- Miss Birtch