in the stared of it the astronauts was collecting dirt then a sand storm came and it was worst than they thought they had to escape on the Hermes mark got hit by a satellite the team leader left with out him because they did not know he is alive they.
He came out of has concussion and the bar that stabbed him keep the pressure in so he would not
die he took the bar out then he put his hand on the wound and walked back to area 3 he numbed it and took the rest of the bar out and stabled it together then he put on a new suit.
The president was talking to the country about how mark died. mark was counting all of his food when he thought of plating potatoes the make more food so he can survive longer. NASA sore something moving on mars then they thought it was just the sand storm so the president dose not get in trouble with the country that they leaved a person on mars they was going to leaved him there so he could die they were trying to find a way to get him back and looking what they he was doing then they figure out that he was trying to get the material that will keep him worm in the night so he could reach area 4.
His first plant grow so then he was so happy then NASA sore were he was going and then he got a camera communicator then he talked to the president and he got the rover working so he could.
Kia ora Angus!
ReplyDeleteI'm impressed with how much you wrote on your very first blog post this year. This shows me you are a very capable blogger when you apply yourself. This is great! For next time, be sure to remember that all names (people and planets) will start with a capital letter, for example mark should be Mark.
Try editing with a buddy who is also finished quickly!
- Miss Birtch