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Thursday 9 March 2017

The sky

The sky can be pink blue or orange and has a flaming ball of fire in it.
It can have white candy floss cloud that move round sky
When the day ends the moon shines bright and

The sky  is pitch black at night but still the stars shine bright.

4 comments:

  1. Wow Angus, what a great description of the sky. You really painted an image in my head. I like that you have found some pictures to add in to your post.

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  2. Hi my name is Nevayah.I go to Waima school.Wow Angus you are very good at doing blogging and all that kind of things and I can see that you have add some post.

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  3. hi my name is hinemaia I am a year 8 student and what I like about your piece of is that it's really cool.

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  4. Hi my name is Emma, and im from Totara 3 greymain school I really enjoyed your blog post. Great chice in photos by for now Emma

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