Hello readers today in writing we have been learning about persuasive writing. I am going to talk about why the school holidays should not be 1 week long because we the holidays in long I gives our brains more time to rest so it does not got over flooded with information then you can't think at school or anywhere. If the holidays where one week everyone will be tried a grumpy and more people would drop out of school because it would be to much for them as they don't have .
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