Magic

Hi guys, me and dani have been working on this animation and writing.  

I tried really hard to to do paragraph.  

So please comment and write want I should work on bye blog you later !!!!!

Magic

It was a bright day so Jefry wanted to take has plane for a spin in the air.  Jefry had ,brown, hair with glasses,a blue t-shirt, brown pants, silver shoes, and yellow skin. He had a black plane and the plane had red letters “jeffrey's plane” on the side. It was a jet plane.

The plane went down. “Aaaaaahhhh we are going down,” Jefry yelled.  The plane crashed and the wing was on fire and the engine when the plane hit the ground

he said “ my head hurts” so he walks in the desert to find help.  

He walked and walked. The he saw what was a magical cactus and the magical cactus said in a low voice “Where do you want to go? Home?” but the cactus took him to the wrong house. So he said “ I hate that cactus!” and went into the forest. Jeffery felt so angry and scared because he saw a bear the bear said “sup”. Jefry said “I am hungry and then the bear said “there is a farm and it has chickens”. So Jeffery went to the farm and he found a chicken to eat.

Then he went into the desert and found a magic dog. He said  “do you want to go home?”. Jeffery  said ‘yes” “How do you know?” “because I have been watching you”. So then Jeffery got taken home.  

“Finally I am home”, Jeffery said. So Jeffery went inside and then the dog came to his house. The dog said can I live with you? he said yes! Then the dog fixed his plane.THE END