I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Angus
ReplyDeleteI like the story you made about the bears and the hunter but some of the words don't make since with others you should re-read it before you post it.
Hi it is Angus thank you nalanee I will do it next time
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ReplyDeletekia ora Angus
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have presented your work.And how you have capital letters and fall stops