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Monday, 28 August 2017

writing

4 comments:

  1. Hi Angus

    I like the story you made about the bears and the hunter but some of the words don't make since with others you should re-read it before you post it.

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  2. Hi it is Angus thank you nalanee I will do it next time

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  4. kia ora Angus

    I like the way you have presented your work.And how you have capital letters and fall stops

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