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Hello reader today in reading we have been learning about primary source and secondary source. In the video it explains what it means. I did the video on a biteable I have use this site before
Thanks for sharing your Biteable video about primary and secondary sources. You gave a clear definition for each one. Next time, see if you can include some more info in your introduction. You could have talked about why we are learning about this and what subject it's for.
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Kia ora Angus
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your Biteable video about primary and secondary sources. You gave a clear definition for each one. Next time, see if you can include some more info in your introduction. You could have talked about why we are learning about this and what subject it's for.
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