Writing Assesment Review.

Hello readers today we have to do more bolgging and I am good at orgasnisation and my next steps. 

Sentence: Make sure I choose the right sentence to show the reader what I want them to know or how I want them to feel.

Structures: Try to match all parts of of my writing to the text type.

Idears: Make my ideas original, so the reader can connect with them.

Add extra information, detail or facts that explain my thinking (elaboration)

vocab: Use words and phrases that grab the reader’s attention and interest.

Punctuation: Use commas to show clauses (different parts of a sentence).

Add punctuation to create mood and show greater detail to hook my readers in.

battle bots

 Hello readers today in DTE we have been building battle bots. We have been doing this over 8 weeks and I have fineshed our battle bots. What I learnd is how to build a robot and how to controll it. The people that was in my group Sereybuth Jesse and wraith my next steps is to mabye let the group help me with the robot more.  Sereybuth made the DLO Jesse made the logo for the battle bot. sat on his butt all period. I made the robot Jesse drove the robot and wraith.

The kid in the lodge

Hello reader today I wrote this becuase we had to in class here it is hope you like it.

A dark blue sky the trees are black as the night with little patchs of snow like little pills of suger. Not much of the sky all you can see is black trees standing still as if they were waiting for someone to come. The snow on the ground with stones laying there as if they were going to sleep,  little bushes coming up as if they woke up from a deep nap. As one little kid waits in his lodge for Christmas to come the next day.

The little kid is very short and he has white hair and pale skin. He is wearing a stirped red and green jersey and he has blue eyes with a couple of freakles onj his face and he has sock the match with his jersey. He is waiting at the window looking for someone to fly past. He has a dreamy look on his face as if he saw Santa right in front of him as there’s a fire right behind him keeping him warm. 

His lodge got got crashed by one of the black trees falling the boy was stuck waiting for help waiting an hour has went past as he waited for someone to help him there was no one around then we all hope was lost he saw something it was a rabbit and then the rabbit ran away in fear.

He slowly froze to death becuase no one came for him,  it was painfull and he did not know what to do he got cut up really bad and that help  with the death as he was alone with branch in his back all he could see was santa pulling the finger and said don’t believe everything people tell you and the kid died.

  

science

 Hello readers, today in science we have been learning about filtering dirty water to clean water we will be doing a experiment about filtering water. filtering is separating small particles from the water to make it drinkable not all things can be dissolved when it is the same size it can't be dissolved. todays experiment we are going to make a mixture then separate them. the chemicals are called copper sulfate is light blue a liquids and transparent and sodium carbonate is colorless a liquid and translucent. What I think is going to happen is when you try and separate them they are not going to.

Method: 

1. Pour approximately 50mL of copper sulfate solution into a beaker.

2. Add the same volume of sodium carbonate solution. A reaction will happen, you should see a cloudy blue precipitate form. Called copper carbonate. 

3. Watch demo then fold filter paper to fit inside the funnel

4. Place the funnel with the filter paper inside of it, into the mouth of a conical flask. 

5. Stir the mixture in the beaker, then carefully pour it into the funnel. 

6. Observe what happened.

      

Matariki

Hello readers today in English we have been doing a do now and the do now is about should Matariki should be a holiday.

Matariki should be an holiday the reason why is because when it is a New Year we celebrate it and since we are making Maori part of New Zealand we should celebrate the New Year with them and have a day of school. That is why we should celebrate matariki and have a day of school.   

Energy Transformations

When energy is passed from one type to another changes. These are the 8 types of energy.

Kinetic.  allows movement 

Heat.  Tempture 

Light. waves you can't see.

Gravitational. force pushing down 

Elastic. something that you can stretch  

Electrical. power  

Sound. energy you can hear 

chemical potential. food and fuel.

We had a marshmallow cannon how we made it was with a balloon and a cup we cut the cup then we cut the balloons neck off and put it around the cup and made a cannon we put the marshmallow in the cannon and shot it outside first it was elastic then it turn into sound and kinetic energy then it turn into gravitational and it hit the ground.   

Debating

Hello readers what we have been doing over the past 2 weeks is debating we have been fighting on about couple of thing I can't rember most of the things but there was someone that knew about debating and it was lucky to see someone that knew a lot about debating and learn from her.  What I think that has been fun is agureing about diffrent things and working with other poeple and what I though was challenging was doing all the work be my self. I don't know if I want to join the school team next year.